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@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Implement a PV ABI shim. Use it to translate PV hypercalls into PVH ones when ne
 \begin{frame}
     \frametitle{Why splitting PV and HVM code?}
     \begin{itemize}
-      \item Users can pick and choose the guest types
+      \item Users can pick and choose the guest interfaces
       \begin{itemize}
         \item Smaller binary, smaller attack surface
         \item Reclaim precious address space if PV is disabled, to let Xen support $>$16TB host memory more easily
@@ -154,6 +154,7 @@ do_baz(...)
       \item Identify all the components that need refactoring
       \begin{itemize}
         \item Dom0 builder
+        \item Domain handling code
         \item Trap handling code
         \item Memory management code
         \item Guest memory accessor
@@ -185,7 +186,8 @@ do_baz(...)
       \begin{itemize}
         \item Abstract out a set of guest interfaces
         \item Adjust internal interfaces between components if necessary
-        \item Fix x86 common code, make PV and HVM configurable
+        \item Fix x86 common code
+        \item Make PV and HVM configurable
       \end{itemize}
     \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
@@ -194,7 +196,7 @@ do_baz(...)
     \frametitle{Why PV ABI in PVH container?}
     \begin{itemize}
       \item Continue to support PV in a more secure manner
-      \item Have more than 128G worth of 32bit PV guests
+      \item Have more than 128GB worth of 32bit PV guests
     \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -208,7 +210,7 @@ do_baz(...)
     \begin{itemize}
       \item Build the PV shim --  essentially a stripped-down Xen hypervisor
       \begin{itemize}
-        \item Go through all PV hypercall handlers, classify them into different groups to be dealt with accordingly
+        \item Go through all PV hypercall handlers, categorize them into the aforementeioned groups
         \item Further refactor PV guest supporting code: provide the "real PV" handlers and "PV shim" handlers while sharing as much code as possible
         \item Change the build system to pull in the right objects
       \end{itemize}
@@ -236,6 +238,7 @@ do_baz(...)
       \item Doing coarse-grained refactoring:
       \begin{itemize}
         \item Dom0 builder (done)
+        \item Domain handling code (done)
         \item Trap handling code (done)
         \item Memory management code (doing)
         \item Guest memory accessor