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       site. To make the migration easier on us, we have closed this form.</p>
       <p>However, the new <a href="http://www.xenproject.org">xenproject.org</a> community site has  a feature called
       the <strong></strong><a href="http://www.xenproject.org/directory/directory.html">Xen Project Ecosystem Pages</a></strong>,
-      that allow you to add entries in a self-service fashion. If you are a community members, company that supplies a product or services
-      that uses Xen or sits on top of Xen, or an open source project interfacing with Xen or one of the Xen Projects you can add yourself.
-      To do so:
+      that allow you to add entries in a self-service fashion.</p>
+      
+      <p>If you are a community member or company that supplies a product/service/open source project that uses Xen or
+      interfaces with Xen or one of its projects or you provide consulting around the Xen Project, you can add yourself
+      to the new eco-system pages. The same is true if you want to point the project's community to a relevant research
+      paper.</p>
       <ul>
        <li>Create a user account on <a href="http://www.xenproject.org">xenproject.org</a></li>
        <li>Log in</li>
        <li>Create a listing using <a href="http://www.xenproject.org/directory/directory/add.html">this link</a></li>
        <li>Make sure you chose the right category and appopriate tags</li>
-       <li>Once submitted, your entry will be approved by a moderator</li>
-       <li>You can edit entries later yourself by going to the listing and clicking the edit button : however changes will have to be approved by a moderator</li>
+       <li>Once submitted, your entry will be approved by a moderator and then go live</li>
       </ul>
-      </p>
+      <p>You can edit entries later yourself by going to the logging into the site, finding your listing and clicking the
+      edit button. However changes will have to be approved by a moderator.</p>
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